Cancer testimonial HVX/Redrock

Really nice looking footage and feel to the piece. I would've been tempted to intercut some static or slightly wandering shallow DOF interview footage. This might feature the garden going off behind her in shallow DOF and also a wider, deep-focus master of the same interview.

The constant racking is a distraction. Water can out of focus, water can in focus, water can out of focus... Sometimes you should just let it sit.

Again, those are small and subjective suggestions against a very nicely realized spot.

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