Brief Action Scene

I just took a look at it. I'm only going to critque on the actual technical aspects of the action and not things like Sound, Lighting, CC , Etc

The best part in it was the car hit.
I would make your blood a little darker because it seems very light red for blood. The puch didn't seem that real to me and that's probably because I didn't see the actual connect of the punch. Also I wouldn't have the actor hold the gun with one hand it just doesn't feel real
 
i'd have to agree about the blood...now this is out of context cuz i don't know the whole story, but where does the blood go??? i'm having continuity issues :)
 
I think maybe you're thinking the character at the end is the one who gets shot. It's actually a different character. The one who is shot does not return. But thanks for the feedback on the blood color.
 
that explains that...i do want to add the car hit looks good. my only other thing would be the beginning doorway sequence. it's a camera thing...the guy is kinda shot facing front and then the girl is from an angle. that might not bother people, but i would've shot both from the front or both at an angle just to match shots...that's just me. overall though it's done well.
 
REHov520 said:
I think maybe you're thinking the character at the end is the one who gets shot. It's actually a different character. The one who is shot does not return. But thanks for the feedback on the blood color.
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Oh really I thought it was the same guy but somehow he came back with not blood on his shirt
 
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