Bone cave teaser

I like the tone and stuff...it just felt really long to me. You could have easily gotten the point across in half the time. Also, I would have liked a more compelling reveal at the end. I get that he's making something...it's just not clear what it is (and not in the "good kind" of non-knowing-way)

Nice job and good luck with everything. Is it a feature?
 
Well some of this is a matter of context. In context its going to be used for a credit sequence and i still feel that erroring on the side of not knowing is what i'd rather do. I'd also argue that it should and needs to be this long. Thanks for the feedback.
 
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