Blue Mist

[agalla1]

I thought the script had some interesting elements...I did have to re-read it to understand some of the transitions in scenes...who was talking to who and what was going on in each scene. your concept was different and I definitely appreciated a very "sci-fi" approach! I would like to read more! ;-)

 

[sfoster]

SPOILERS

Best of luck with it. I'll glady read your next draft for you as well.

alex

After the script fest is over, I'll send you my rewrites if I get the time. Thanks!

Thanks to all of you for your awesome comments. You guys are going to make this an awesome short film, perhaps eventually a feature. I may have the concept, but after reading about all the things I left out and your suggestions about what I need to explain, I'm excited as a writer. Usually I write for myself, and I know what I mean. This is a bad habit that you guys are helping me break. Thanks to all of you. Oh and Stylz, I have thick skin! I can take the comments! :nads: See I keep getting back up!