OTHER: Bloody Escape - A Dramatic Action Web Series

I'm going to reserve a post, too. That way if I have comments later they'll be the first ones people see, and therefore the most important.

[edit] That was really well done. The first hit from the well dressed guy didn't sell very well, but the rest did. I'd like to see what else you can do with this.
 
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Thanks for the support - please share with all your friends! We really think we'll be able to create a strong following and a fantastic series with our concept.

Kegan
 
When you're doing a series, especially a webseries - It's so important you capture the interest of the audience right in the first 10-20 seconds (Well, 1-3 minutes if we're talking tv). If you don't give the viewers a reason to keep watching, they'll find something else. It's like "Oh she's tied up.... Ooo look a flashing banner *click* aahh *viruses*". What I would have wanted to see would be the girl taking punches - Like starting the whole episode off with flashes of her taking hits, and THEN once you got me hooked, then you'd show the actual story (Just an example). :kali:

The dialogue was pretty... Not bad, it's just we've heard it all before. "It's funny how something so small can do so much damage" (Or whatever the line was). A tip is to take something we've all heard before, and put a twist on it - Like
"I like it how something so small can do so much damage..." (And now we're all "Ohh I recognize this) ".. It makes something so big much more fun using *Picks up a large bat*". Not the most clever example, but you get the idea.

Other than that it was really good. I love the color and feel of it - So easy on the eyes. And I'll definitely keep and eye out for the coming webisodes.
 
Thank you for your feedback! Very much appreciated. We will likely re-shoot this episode at the end and taking all feedback under consideration. Share around the Kickstarter page with all your friends if you don't mind!

Keep watching, we'll be sure to raise the production value as we go on (and cut out cheesy dialogue, heh!)

Kegan
 
Comments guys? Suggestions on how to market it better? Remember, you only have to pay if the WHOLE AMOUNT is reached. Share on forums and with your friends and family if you'd like to support us!

Thanks,

Kegan
 
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