Black Sheep - Short Film in HD

[samhendi2007]

Hey guys, please view our new film and let us know what you think.
Thanks


Black Sheep

Synopsis
Laura, a rebellious teenager spends the night away from home without informing her elder sister where she has been. After searching throughout the night, Dani finds Laura hanging around in a car park with her friend. Dani confronts Laura leading to an argument which things are said that they would live to regret.

Directed, Filmed & Edited by
Sam Hendi

Written & Sound by
Shahram Shayesteh

Lighting & Casting by
Elly Nagarajan

Music Composed & Performed by
David Portugheis (www.davidportugheis.com)

Starring
Hyette Duffy
Tracey Button
Abena Bentum

Filmed using
Sony HVR-V1E & Letus35 Extreme

Edited using
Sony Vegas

Special Thanks to
Sainsbury’s Collindale, Sony & Letus


Black Sheep on Youtube HD

Black Sheep on Vimeo HD

 

[jonE5]

Very well done, the camera swayed (not shaked) a little but it may have worked for you in this case. I loved how your music slowly helped build the tension as it rose with the characters. Very subtle yet powerful technique.

I liked yuor cutaways, but you could tell that you did a lot of really long takes and just mixed them up. It worked to keep the audience from getting bored, but i think a few more angles thrown in there would have worked in your favor.

Glad to see more from you, look forward to the next.

 

[dre83]

it looks and sounds very well.

Only small remark I have is that sometimes I hear the cutting in sound. But only few times.

Sound is very good recorded.

 

[samhendi2007]

It worked to keep the audience from getting bored, but i think a few more angles thrown in there would have worked in your favor.

Thanks for your comment :happy:

I had filmed a few more angles, mostly further away, but i felt that being closer to the actors was better. I ended up scrapping those extra shots.

 

[samhendi2007]

Only small remark I have is that sometimes I hear the cutting in sound. But only few times.

Hi, thanks for your feedback, the cutting of the sound is quite noticeable sometimes and we didnt have time to re-record the audio. However, i added an ambience track to try and eleminate the cutting sounds.