Cynic821
Carbonite Member
7th review:
(all my friends do my film stuff, when forced atleast
)
anyways, i think i really enjoy the work, this when watched , the first thing i noticed was effort! that doesnt always get you anywhere, but as a person in general i can appreciate the effort, i felt was missing from basically every single entry, seriously.
A few notes i notice: I noticed that not one time did we see the kids and the car in motion at the same time, which was awkward , i think none of them have licenses? a few smiles cracked i thought i saw, and goes without saying that i thought the acting was very weak.
when they first got a hold of the guy to interogate, i thought they were just friends pranking eachother with how easy of a time they gave him and how no fight was put up by anyone in the movie.
The trucker looked maybe 16, 18 max because he has more facial hair than me, and im 23. late bloomer with facial hair though. I thought you could have added maybe 3 more years to his age if you took his glasses off atleast.
When the end finally arrived, i atleast didnt feel like i did with basically every other short, that it was trying to reach the 6 minute mark instead of just going at its own pace. Then i thought it was outlandish a bit that jumping him and him getting busted would end up on the news, but atleast your head is in the right plcae, thats cool.
A for effort, but gotta give a D for execution, but then i think the script couldnt produce better results. Good results with the DVX 100 though.
thats it.
maybe i should give a disclaimer before i get warned? ( i had to stop reviewing horrorfest because i wasnt being that positive, this is how i feel and i guess ill just post until im stopped again)
(all my friends do my film stuff, when forced atleast
)anyways, i think i really enjoy the work, this when watched , the first thing i noticed was effort! that doesnt always get you anywhere, but as a person in general i can appreciate the effort, i felt was missing from basically every single entry, seriously.
A few notes i notice: I noticed that not one time did we see the kids and the car in motion at the same time, which was awkward , i think none of them have licenses? a few smiles cracked i thought i saw, and goes without saying that i thought the acting was very weak.
when they first got a hold of the guy to interogate, i thought they were just friends pranking eachother with how easy of a time they gave him and how no fight was put up by anyone in the movie.
The trucker looked maybe 16, 18 max because he has more facial hair than me, and im 23. late bloomer with facial hair though. I thought you could have added maybe 3 more years to his age if you took his glasses off atleast.
When the end finally arrived, i atleast didnt feel like i did with basically every other short, that it was trying to reach the 6 minute mark instead of just going at its own pace. Then i thought it was outlandish a bit that jumping him and him getting busted would end up on the news, but atleast your head is in the right plcae, thats cool.
A for effort, but gotta give a D for execution, but then i think the script couldnt produce better results. Good results with the DVX 100 though.
thats it.
maybe i should give a disclaimer before i get warned? ( i had to stop reviewing horrorfest because i wasnt being that positive, this is how i feel and i guess ill just post until im stopped again)