Beat me Up

I like the close up on the girl and then pulling out, Atleast, where you were going with it, BUT it didn't seem real enough with the guy struggling... I would have had them both dead and her standing/towering over them... or something...

Locations were not great.

I just finished the 48hour film contest in Miami... my first time short film and yup everything does go wrong like my DP w/ 2nd Canon XH-A1 dropping out 3 days before contest... Totally feel you with things going wrong ... check out my film I posted a thread yesterday... leave feedback... I'm doing a reedit for my based on all the feedback.
 
Thanks for the feedback rustes......
I agree with you about the locations
I really liked the ones you used on your film
good ole metro rail...
made me miss miami.... well not really

anyone else?
 
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