SHORT: B.B.Q My first short film

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joey46

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Hey guys so i finally made my first short film hope you enjoy it if you do feel free to vote thanks http://www.rodemic.com/myrodereel/watch/336



hey guys lots of views leave feed back to please this was my first and i made lots of mistakes please share thank you all.


edit- still no feed back over a 100 views come on guys bring this forumsome life tell me if i done ok are not please
 
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I did not understand what I was watching and could barely understand what there were saying.. lot of slang mumbling it seemed.

Terms of feedback, there wasn't really a story there.. it was like a trailer for something.

I don't know what else to say there isn't much to it.

Good job finishing your first short though.
 
Loki said:
I did not understand what I was watching and could barely understand what there were saying.. lot of slang mumbling it seemed.

Terms of feedback, there wasn't really a story there.. it was like a trailer for something.

I don't know what else to say there isn't much to it.

Good job finishing your first short though.
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I agree audio and dialog was crap! Its an alien invasion that wasn't properly edited but like i said first short next one will be 100 percent better :) you should post your channel maybe i can learn something from you.
 
It might not be that good but I'm at top 30 so I must be doing something right thank you to all who voted
 
Thank you to all who have voted. I know my short film wants the best, it had tons of flaws but it was my first. We are currently number 18 in my rode reel and we would of never gotten that far without your vote thank you.
 
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