SHORT: Awakening - An action short film

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Hi everyone.
Recently, I and my friends had made an action short film named "Awakening".
We would love to know what do you think about it ? Please comment and give us some advice so we can make improvement in our works.
Sorry for my bad language
Best regard.
Here is the link

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C5nXSHvnIb0

Thanks for reading
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sorry this is nothing more than some kids playing around with a camera. I do not constitute this as being a "film". Some of the CGI is decent but from what I understand even imovie can do that these days. Sorry.. Some advice:
The editing is not tight. Its sloppy and unconvincing.
The shots are badly exposed, you have majoy burnt out white highlights in a lot of the shots. Its better to slightly under expose than over expose.
Also gettgin real actors and a boom mic is a must! Also a script can help sometimes :P
 
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