Awakening - 1. part

petrspetla said:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5UQ4j83AmXg&feature=youtu.be

EN subtitles comming soon. Original music with second part comming 14. march 2012. Composer is little busy now.
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A couple of points... not understanding Czech... the visuals did not really build for me. The 'story' seemed to be carried mostly by dialog. I tend to not 'like' a lot of dialog in a short film.

The tendency in using 'dialog' is that there is a lot of expository statements, that in film, should be shown rather than told.

The phone sequence: The 'ringer' in the phone sounded like a 'hardwired' phone ringer, and not a cell phone jingle type ringer. If someone was in a deep sleep, and the phone that far a way... I don't think it would awaken the sleeper.

Room echo: When the group are drinking and playing darts the echo to me gets in the way. Had they been mic'd 'closer, the echo could have been controlled to give a 'big room' feeling, but not too much to interfere with the listening.
 
Well i shoudnt have posted it without EN subtitles, because you didnt understand it and i dont agree with you.
This is just first part of whole movie Awakening (there will be 3) and it's about sportsman who is in comma. He is fighting with himself in his own head.
The telephone and radio are connection with real world outside and in this first part sportsman dont know whats going on.

Room echo -> he is dreaming.
 
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