ExtremeSleuth
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This is a film I wrote and directed last August. Took a while to get the editing together and finalize everything.
Enjoy.
Enjoy.
SHORT: At Long Last
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j1clark@ucsd.edu
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For me there was way too much talking. I think probably a good 3-4 minutes could be chopped, and still tell the same story.
On technical note thats:
Audio could use some work. The mics seem to be 'at a distance' for a number of the shots.
Didn't quite like the color of the 'six months prior' flashback.