Assasin...Check it out!!!

verry well put together man. What cam were you using? Can you break down the CC/FX process? I'd love to get an uncompressed version to give it a better lookover.
 
came out great. The scope view needs just a little work to make it more dynamic, but it was a great clip.

The editing needs tightening just a little, more in the pace of when you opened the box and got the gun. That was fast and intense, and really convied the mood. Then things kind of slowed a little.

But in all, that was great stuff. Well done. Please keep your clips coming. And not only is the quality of video great, but you are really paying needed attention to sound, and it shows. The sound work alone is very impressive.

Again, well done.
 
Thanks alott guys that really motivates me..and yeah about the scope i draw it in after effects from scratch..so it's not that good and yeah maybe ur right about the pace and mood thing maybe i'll use this tip in my next clips...and i do focus on the sound alot!!.. thanks again and i will keep my clips coming!!
 
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Thanks alott guys that really motivates me..and yeah about the scope i draw it in after effects from scratch..so it's not that good and yeah maybe ur right about the pace and mood thing maybe i'll use this tip in my next clips...and i do focus on the sound alot!!.. thanks again and i will keep my clips coming!!

Those were suggestions only. I'm not the film guru who knows everything. So please don't take what I wrote as anything but my personal observation, and suggestion. I re read my post, and it came off as arrogant and condesending. I certainly didn't mean for it to sound that way. For that I appologize.

The fact that you are coming up with ideas, filming, and completing them speaks volumes about you. It's that kind of attitude and work ethic that takes people places. With a little polishing on the After Effects portions of you work, which is what this subforum and I am here for, your are well on your way to doing something big with yourself.

Your work shows creativity and talent, but most of all, you are going from concept to finished work. And the work is good.


Like I said, keep those clips coming, and ask as many questions here as you need. You'll get the answers you want and your work will get from good to great.
 
Thankss alott Matt Grunau!!... ur really giving me a push to my next clips and things to make...u motivate alot mann..thanks agaain!!
 
Thankss alott Matt Grunau!!... ur really giving me a push to my next clips and things to make...u motivate alot mann..thanks agaain!!

You are very welcome. New let's talk about how we can make the "Jumper" clips look a little better. :evil:
 
omg, jumper needs to die lol, it's like a first year AE student was like ... "dude?! i can make people look like they can dissappear?!!! LETS MAKE A MOVIE!!!!" .... :S kill me.... lol
 
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