Any feedback?

Story itself is good, though the final result is just bad.. i was co-author of this and for sure, this could have been made way much better if put more effort to directing, camera work,
sound... even not having pro instruments could have been done much better by just spending
more time working on it.

acting was also mediocre, what i like, girl's narration is very good, except a few moments.

sorry for being harsh, but if you do something, do the best you can in any situation, and i
think this hasn't been done in this case...
 
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