SHORT: Amazing Action Film - Cache 1

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mavenapt

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The short film Cache 1, follows the story of three friends who take different turns on the path of life. The plot revolves around familiar themes of greed, loyalty and ambition. The film highlights the underlying corruption in society and has an appealing take on society.
As this is our first short film and we did not have any filming experience before, I apologize for our committed mistakes.
You can comment below to give us suggestions. Thanks.
 
from an amateur point of view, i like it. things that's obvious: the character's expressions. not really feeling it but good overall. also like the start
 
"Voilence" ? :-p

And I did not take the advice :-p

Few small "isues"

- SFX yes, it's needed of course, but besides SFX you also need other sounds. Now it feels a bit empty but if you add some abience sounds (rumble, wind) and some Foley (clothes, footsteps) and some sounds of breathing, it will be a lot better.

- some sounds just don't fit... It's not because you see in a soundlibrary "grabbing gun" that it fits ALL grabbing gun actions... That one around 00:45 doesn't fit... and it's also 2 frames to late....

- watch out for left right ... dialogues are always mono....all other sounds are stereo except sometimes for SFX...
 
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