Some really nice shots there I must say, good job! Only thing that caught my eye that I would have done different is to not include shots like the one at 1.34, it is not flattering for the model to show that she has some skin issues going on, or at least I would have tried to soften her skin with the "Cosmo" effect in Magic bullet looks.
Other than that, love the B&W, you really nailed the proper look of it, would love to know what lenses you used!