disjecta
Lucky Duck
I really enjoyed your film. It had an innocence in it missing in a lot of films today. You created a nice intimate atmosphere and a little light tension between both characters. Even though the ending was kind of expected, it worked well. I mean, when you look at all the classic romantic comedies or dramas, you just know the guy is going to get the girl, and he does 99% of the time so I have no problem with it. I probably would have cut the length of the stare at the end also, that was a little long to feel natural.
Your sound for the most part was well done, although I would clean up some of the announcer's voice. It clips pretty abruptly in places and makes it feel disconnected from the station.
Also work on your lighting. In some of the initial shots, it's very apparent that you are using multilple lights and they are casting too many shadows. It also looks like you might be using different light temperatures because there seems to be various color casts on the guy.
Other than that, in my opinion, you did a fine job.
Your sound for the most part was well done, although I would clean up some of the announcer's voice. It clips pretty abruptly in places and makes it feel disconnected from the station.
Also work on your lighting. In some of the initial shots, it's very apparent that you are using multilple lights and they are casting too many shadows. It also looks like you might be using different light temperatures because there seems to be various color casts on the guy.
Other than that, in my opinion, you did a fine job.
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