A trailer for my short

ramsaur

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Sorry i've already put this up in the off topic.. but mods you may delete.

I have been working on a 21 minute short film. A war movie. Please watch and give feedback. Thanks!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NWMLo_OgOrc

Edit: I've changed to be a teaser and not a trailer. Just because there is no dioluge, sound, sound effects, and does not tell you the story. I will be releasing trailer soon that does tell you what it is all about.
 
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I think you do have a future in the film business (not that I have any)
But there were many problems with the film I found troubling
like they only had guns and didn't have any other gear, like say clips for their guns. or more simple than that water cans to drink from, you know fighting makes you real thirsty.
Their fighting technique made me think in some instances that this was a comedy.
I liked alot of the shoots but the ones where they sit should have been more stable in my view made it look sort of documentary.
anyway good job
 
dangal said:
I think you do have a future in the film business (not that I have any)
But there were many problems with the film I found troubling
like they only had guns and didn't have any other gear, like say clips for their guns. or more simple than that water cans to drink from, you know fighting makes you real thirsty.
Their fighting technique made me think in some instances that this was a comedy.
I liked alot of the shoots but the ones where they sit should have been more stable in my view made it look sort of documentary.
anyway good job
well thanks, but just giving you a heads up that what all you saw does not mean it's what you are thinking. There was still many clips in there that were not fully edited. Maybe you like to laugh at war? I don't know because I really do not know you. Maybe you don't. But I really have no clue why you thought that was funny when the whole movie is serious if you were to watch it. (which i am selling dvd's) And this isn't a feature film so we really don't have the budget for alot of gear. We are just using what we have. And plus we do reload in the movie because all you saw was a trailer for it. You would have to watch the film to see them reload the gun. But I get what you are saying.. Thanks for the input.
 
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