A suspense Scene

Robbie Comeau

Robbie Comeau

Como's back. back again
Hey guys,

http://blip.tv/file/514913?filename=ComeauProductions-TestScene285.mov

Was bored today so I thought I'd make a short. First it was going to be roughly
a 2-3 minute action/comedy, then it lead to a one minuteish suspense/horror.
It would be cool if it was the first scene of a movie. If you guys can build off of it
and think of a story, and this video could be the intro scene, or any scene,
PM me or write here what you think the story could be about!


thanks


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Well, it looks good. The acting was kind of bad and logic would tell me that if a guy passes out or dies, his legs would give way and he would fall on the ground. I understand it was just a test but even still the whole thing felt kind of pointless.
But i like the editing style and the look of it, and I'm sure in context of an actual story it might work. Just work on the acting a bit.
 
I think editing and cinematography were the main point of this test shoot, because it didn't really have a story per se. Some cuts were a little weak, but overall nice job - in terms of developing the idea, there's lots of ways you could take it, but many, if not all are cliche.

-Kegan
 
Maybe not as a start of a movie, but rather before that he gets dumped by his girlfriend, fired from his job, disowned by his parents, declared bankrupt, wins the lottery but loses his ticket and got mugged. Great look and editing
 
No problem, I recommend the package if you are into making movies/trailers. There mostly scary sound effects to.

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