A Sure Moment Short Film

[NickAbrey]

Hey guys,

This is a short film me and my friends made, It was filmed with a Canon 5d. Its about two strangers meeting each other at a bus stop. Its a romantic short film. I hope you like it guys! :cheesy:

A Sure Moment

http://vimeo.com/28616710

 

[jambredz]

really nice. only thing that bothered me was the blown out image. but the story, sound, acting and everything else was really good.

 

[NickAbrey]

Thanks for checking out the film, Glad you enjoyed the film!

 

[reem12]

Yeah pretty nice. Actress was really easy on the eye. She has a look that draws you in and acting was pretty good as well. Blown out parts gets lest distracting due to good acting.

 

[NickAbrey]

Thanks man, thanks for watching, glad you think the acting is good to!

 

[videoatlanta]

Ya, Nice job. Looks and sounds good. A little over exposed on most shots.

 

[NickAbrey]

Thanks man

 

[trez]

The image itself looks nice, I don't mind blown out highlights. Acting is pretty convincing. Editing (directing?) is horrible, however - you cross the line of action on every cut. This results in both characters staying in the right half of the frame looking towards its left edge - this is very distracting and confusing - as such should be reserved for special moments, when there's some important dramatic reason for it. Make sure you know 180 degrees rule when shooting your next project - it's gonna be much smoother to watch.

 

[a_atias]

I like this. Like others have said, the image is a bit blown out but other then that, good job.