A Short Story - Dangerous Derk Productions

My favorite film of the fest. Please take all comments with a grain of salt and continue to follow your personal style & vision...cause it's spot on!
Really great job.

Cheers!
 
Advice for making the finals. Actually I think you had a lot of elements in this that made it a close contender. That crazy two sided moment by the phone was excellent, if the whole short continued in this madness you would be there I think. Look at Zaza's view for example, get a few more on board like this.....

I think an added element of style in shooting and lighting could have really won the audience over - in this case the guy was having a paranoid schizophrenic moment - use your lighting and camera to put us too close to it, make us uncomfortable.
 
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