SHORT: A Real Hero

[electrofilms]

ElectrofilmsENT© 2011

Shot on Camera: 5D Mk II with a Nikon 50mm 1.8 and Canon 24-105L.
Entirely filmed in one day/night for class.

All editing and visual effects were done in After Effects.
Original screenplay was written by Nick Campbell.

Hope you enjoy.

 

[Chris Adler]

Hey, pretty nice looking. I think it really could use a nice conservative grading though. Some of the fight/struggle choreography obviously didn't work very well and the acting flat. The edit could be a bit tighter.. the dip to black is really long and the guy triple takes on the newspaper at the end and seeing him lay down didn't move the story forward. Could have ended on the article as he looks at it. Overall nice job.

 

[electrofilms]

Thanks for watching. This was "Night-before-it's-due" group project. I sure wish I had more control over the camera, As I was playing the hobo and trying my best to direct at the same time. I wasn't able to get as much coverage as I needed so a lot of the editing had to be fudged.