A MoAb Murder

I see the feel you were going for, but it was pretty boring. Over a minute of looking at someone through a window is too much. Some music could help it.
 
Actually, there was music - and TV and answering machine...I really liked the audio in this - it reminded me of John Moran's "The Manson Family - an Opera"

The story was a bit of a one trick pony, but A+ for atmosphere.

(I'm making an effort to reply to the 0-1 response club, of which I am a card carrying member)
 
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