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[Filmbuff28]

Hello all,

This is a 3 min short that I made for a production class. It is 6 pages of script in 3 minutes so it is a bit rushed. The time limit was very strict. I am currently working on making the real version of the short which will be significantly longer. I would love your feedback and/or critical review on what you liked, what I could lengthen/shorten, what you wished was there or what you wish was not there. Please feel free to be as candid as you wish.

Short info:
Shot on=2x HVX200's w/3x 4gb and 1x 8gb P2 card)
Budget=$400
Lights=12 Arri's (1k's, 650k's, and 300k's)
Original Format=720p24pn

Thanks in advance for any comments, advice, or help you have to offer!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k6FywKuSTU4

 

[dantewaters]

Hello all,

This is a 3 min short that I made for a production class. It is 6 pages of script in 3 minutes so it is a bit rushed. The time limit was very strict. I am currently working on making the real version of the short which will be significantly longer. I would love your feedback and/or critical review on what you liked, what I could lengthen/shorten, what you wished was there or what you wish was not there. Please feel free to be as candid as you wish.

Short info:
Shot on=2x HVX200's w/3x 4gb and 1x 8gb P2 card)
Budget=$400
Lights=12 Arri's (1k's, 650k's, and 300k's)
Original Format=720p24pn

Thanks in advance for any comments, advice, or help you have to offer!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k6FywKuSTU4

For the little time you had I felt i was good.
However the actors could have added a bit more life and energy.
I would like to see the longer version.