A girl named Lilly

[kprince]

Shot with 5D

 

[Steve_Arm]

Nice. What's the use of those photos?
I would choose a different color for the bikini, a darker one.

 

[Elvis]

Great shots, but the colour of suit would make a difference for the better!

 

[SomewhereinLA]

I would tone down the eyes, looks a bit fake.

 

[MattinSTL]

Both are very beautiful shots... bikini darker... yes... eyes a little more tame... yes.

The first shot is my favorite though... for some reason that one makes me melt... I think it's the way she's holding her hair up but a bit is still curving down out of her hand and perfectly framing her face (around the upper right side).

*sigh* Nice.

 

[Jason Ramsey]

good. agree about eyes and bikini. There is some nice angelic lighting going on, and a darker colored bikini would help to accent that in her skin tones, rather than take away from it
Jason

 

[mikkowilson]

Or no Bik...

Eh yeah, umm.. I agree that the bright green eyes have too much "pop". Almost a "Woah!" effect that makes you back up for a moment before looking properly at the picture.

That water looks cold.

- Mikko

 

[Jason Ramsey]

Mikko. you kill me.


Mikko ... needs to keep his hands on the keyborad

Jason

 

[Tom Lowe]

Or no Bik...

Eh yeah, umm..

Hehe.

 

[PDX_DVX]

I agree about a darker colored bikini, and also, my only crit on the 2nd one would be to maybe add a little backlight, or hairlight, or something to seperate her dark hair from the dark "ring" around the hot tub. Also tone down the eyes. Other than that, composition's great, and her look is amazing. Good work!

What lens did you use on these, and what was your lighting setup?