a 2 min idea in film

I liked it. You got a point across (but left it up to the viewer to decide what the point was).

One thing I'd do: make the quick cuts longer in the beginning (desktop items and such), then speed them up as you go along.

Well, you did do that toward the end, but I'd make the shortening go through the entire piece. If you know what I mean.
 
nice.. only critique is the lighting job done in the first scene when the guy sits down at his desk, you can see shadows on the walls.

GenJerDan said:
One thing I'd do: make the quick cuts longer in the beginning (desktop items and such), then speed them up as you go along.

Well, you did do that toward the end, but I'd make the shortening go through the entire piece. If you know what I mean.
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it was a 2 minute project, so he cant lengthen the project even though it would make it better.
 
Trebax,

i liked it.

i came away with something from it.

but I'm curious what your intention was?

good job doing it w/o words, too.

-MK
 
tshark said:
it was a 2 minute project, so he cant lengthen the project even though it would make it better.
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Could steal some time from other shots, I guess. Only talking about a few frames here and there.

It wasn't a major criticism, though. Just a thought. :)
 
thanks for the comments everyone. I agree, the lighting job on the entry scene is poor. I should have spent more time on that. Technically, the clip is well under 2 mins, so I can extend a few of the clips a bit.

My intention was to leave the viewers feeling like the man in the film towards the end - as if you were just awakened from a flashback. Thanks again for the compliments!
 
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