8 Circuits Movie Trailer

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I made this trailer for my video production final. The idea behind it is an idea i've been toying with in my head. As of now there is no plan to make a feature out of. Someday in the future I may do something very similar in terms of story but I'd have to write the script first. Let me know what you think about it in terms of everything. I look forward to any input.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_H55TOisttA

Oh yeah, theres some other projects shot with the dvx on my youtube account if you want to have a look at them.
 
Ok,
I really tried to find something positive to say about this, but I just can´t.
This looked like a random collection of AE effects at preset, applied to randomly shot scenes.
The scene with the talking raven was out of focus, and the bathtube scene made me laugh out loud because it looked more like sth you normaly do in the toilette...
Content wise I can imagine what your intention was, it just wasn´t visualized properly IMHO, both technicaly and artisticaly.
But maybe your talent is in storytelling and next time you just focus on the plot and get some help for filming and effects.
All in all, just my2 c of course...
 
Hmm...well good attempt. Some problems I had were that one, it's suppose to be a movie trailer, but this almost looked like an actual short film. It wasn't as fast paced as a movie trailer would be.
Two, I didn't understand anything even as far as the plot goes...
The "talking" forces of whatever, especially at the end was odd, and very weird to say "and remember to kill God..." What?!
The blood spurting out in the sink, hahahahahh. sorry cheesy effect.

But on the bright side, it was interesting. It held my attention.

So, some pros and cons, but keep working on stuff I suppose. It's good to get the weird stuff out of our brains, so that way it doesnt work its way up on screens and ruin your career.
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