7 Minute Pilot for my New Show

[ZombieSquid]

Here's a ROUGH cut of the pilot for my new online comedy Action Force Militia. This a rough sound mix sans credits etc., but you can get a good feel for the tone of the show, characters, etc. Lemme know what you think! We should have the first full episode finished and up on the site ( http://www.zombiesquid.com ) within the next month.

Thanks!

15MB H.264

http://www.zombiesquid.com/video/pilotv5.mov

 

[wmiller@csulb.edu]

i dont know, but it felt really cheezy to me. Some good shots, but you should get some lights.

Good Luck

 

[ZombieSquid]

Its supposed to be cheesy.

 

[Noel Evans]

Nice one Zombie. Liked the whole concept. Some dialogue could just be a little tighter. And some shots were too unlit. But that aside they made me laugh......I wish I could see it a little larger but hey this is the web. I think if you kept this going everything in the production process would just keep getting better, and I think you should. I love your characters.