60 Second film (on unite)

[martin096]

hey guys, hope this is the right forum to post in if not ah well.

I need to create a 60 Second film competition to do with unite. i got an idea but i want your opinion as if i made it to the top 20 videos, it'll be shown on tv and the audience will have to vote so i want to make sure its good enough material.

ok... so... i have no video but just Imagen the story ok... I'll post when its complete! so... it starts of with a guy and a girl on the phone to each other as they are walking along town getting ready to meet. Its been a long time since they last met so they are crying down the phone all excited. well to cut the story short to the end, as they finally get to each other instead of them hugging each other they walk straight past each other and meet up with a complete stranger who they wasn't on the phone to so the twist was... they wasn't actually talking to each other but they was talking to the stranger you wasn't expecting.

The End!

what you reckon???

 

[Robbie Comeau]

There was a story on here a couple weeks ago. Same idea. There talking on the phone, and you can see the shot switching back and forth, and it looks like they're talking to each other. At the end (to make it short) they walk right by each other, and your all surprised.

It was well done, its on www.atomfilms.com

I think this would be up in the twenties if it was shot and edited well.

 

[ESTEBEVERDE]

There was a story on here a couple weeks ago. Same idea. There talking on the phone, and you can see the shot switching back and forth, and it looks like they're talking to each other. At the end (to make it short) they walk right by each other, and your all surprised.

It was well done, its on www.atomfilms.com

I think this would be up in the twenties if it was shot and edited well.

What's the name of the film?

 

[martin096]

i couldn't find it also but thanks for your help 'ESTEBEVERDE' boosted my confident's up.