6 Day Short Film Festival, 5 Minute Movie

well, if you really want a critique:

i think the film is certainly effective in carrying out your message, and that it works technically, though the message comes off as being a little bit too preachy in my opinion. i feel like i absolutely must accept all of your ideas in order to agree with what your saying, and i really couldn't help but feel slightly manipulated by that annoyance.

once again, i don't wan't you to think that i didn't like it, and i certainly recognize that it is a short; it's just that i couldn't help but feel like i was being led around from one idea to the next, as though the filmmaker didn't trust me enough to explore these ideas on my own.

just to reiterate, i think your film does work, i just really didn't care for the premise, and it didn't help any that most of the ideas felt slightly undercooked, at least for my tastes. good job though.
 
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