4 short pilots

seriously funny and uncomfortable moment. nice cuts and framing of shots. performance was good. clean images and colors. really liked what you did with the audio. thanks for sharing.
 
those were great shorts man, very nice. no negative comments really.

only thing was the lighting when he got to his house, very dark, could have used a bit more key lighting.
 
Thanks all. I put them up in my preferred order, the last one is cute but probably not as tight as the others. PaPa, maybe you are watching on a PC...? I know that the screen gamma tends to make Mac-originated material look dark on those screens. The scene you reference is definitely on the dark side--for this film the client wanted it to look more "guerilla", almost unlit so I used less resources than on the other films on purpose (2 lighting units at the apartment, 3 at the bar).
 
I liked all 4 of them, the Cell Phone guy is really funny. Keep up the good work!
 
Those shorts were really cool and funny, I'd have to say the Kung Fu one was my least favourite though. The Handshake one was done really well, the look, the soundtrack, actors, everything was really well executed.

Bad luck about them not getting picked up!
 
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