3rd college Project "A Night Out"

jaket

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Went on for too long at many points. The begining when he's doing nothing, when he waited at the train station, etc... just felt too long for something as simple as that. Could have been cut down by a lot.

But fun stuff. Scott is a great character.

Should be more about him rather than just the set up of Brian. Probably should have started with brian meeting scott and then scott brings him on this wild adventure, not just the one thing they did together.
 
Thanks for the feedback.
I was thinking it felt a little long in places. I am going to be re-editing it in HD, that will give me the chance to try cutting it down.

This whole production was really done on the fly. I had written scripts and done pre-production for two other ideas, but decided that they were too complicated for the time I had left in the class. So this just developed as we were shooting. we never could come up with a solid ending, so the teacher suggested that we just end it ambiguously.

Thanks again for the feedback.:)
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