30 second reel. Feedback, please!

Hmmm, I didn't think the girl fit with your other stuff. Almost everything was of nature before and after her. I would try to get more poeple in your shots, maybe stage some stuff. I liked the lighting on the girl, just thought she seemd out of place. A lot of your shots were shaky as well, did you use a tripod? I liked the edn gate shot, and the DOF change. I also liked the running man. Get a little closer, and get some people in the shots with great lighting and you will blow everyone away.
 
Lose the chick, lose the grainy shots, and add more variety in images.

If you're using this to promote yourself, you're gonna wanna show potential clients that you're capable of shooting a lot of different things.
 
Great feedback everyone!
I knew you'd mention the shakiness- the first day I took the camera out I forgot my tripod. Oh man, I'm such a professional. Sigh.
Any thoughts on the music? I really like this cut, but it feels like it's overpowering the video. I want the footage to match its intensity. I'll try to get some more dramatic images in there.
I'll get a smaller file size up as well.
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