COMMERCIAL: 30 Second Production Reel
- Thread starter Bayne
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adamrahn
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I like your cameo at 0:17 
In all seriousness though the shots were good, but the whole thing seemed a bit disjointed and chaotic to me, I would rather see a couple sequences to get a feel for how you shoot those as opposed to a bunch of individual shots of action/pretty actors. I will say that the editing went well with the fast paced music though.
Adam
In all seriousness though the shots were good, but the whole thing seemed a bit disjointed and chaotic to me, I would rather see a couple sequences to get a feel for how you shoot those as opposed to a bunch of individual shots of action/pretty actors. I will say that the editing went well with the fast paced music though.
Adam
j1clark@ucsd.edu
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I like your cameo at 0:17
In all seriousness though the shots were good, but the whole thing seemed a bit disjointed and chaotic to me, I would rather see a couple sequences to get a feel for how you shoot those as opposed to a bunch of individual shots of action/pretty actors. I will say that the editing went well with the fast paced music though.
Adam
I will second the 'disjointed' feeling while viewing...
I'd recommend the 'theme' sequences, and while you want to keep it under 30 seconds, perhaps fewer shots, slightly longer... unless the 'action' drives it... to allow someone to see some of your framing, etc.