3 Minute Documentary for film school

k, just watched it.

to be honest man, the only parts i found interesting were the first and last 30 seconds, everything in between had no interest i.m.h.o. Perhaps it is my ignorance, but seeing people going back and forth between the frame, with planks of wood, does not allow me to connect the image with the subject and thus makes it slightly boring.

I can live with the image quality, i really liked the close ups on the mouths at the end, most interesting part really. But the rest falls behind quite a bit.

oh, and the bee, that was great as well.
 
the best part were the close ups of people putting the berries in theirs mouths.

Why did you put the guy loading lumber on his truck in the video?
 
thx for the comments guys
I totaly agree about the middle part
I'll think what I can do with it
 
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