16mm Student Film Experimental 40 seconds Please Critique

[leaftors]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GUxQQ3ts9Qg

Please critique my short film.
It's an experimental short where we had to use camera motion to evoke a feeling/emotion.

Don't mind the choppy part at 0:38 I cut some frames out accidently.

 

[BennyWhiskers]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GUxQQ3ts9Qg

Please critique my short film.
It's an experimental short where we had to use camera motion to evoke a feeling/emotion.

Don't mind the choppy part at 0:38 I cut some frames out accidently.

** SPOILER **
Waldo at :40 second mark.

 

[BennyWhiskers]

oh and you made me dizzy

 

[Gary Sconce]

rogar-BigGrin(DBG)Definitely experimental. I liked the interesting choice of shots and the strange way it keeps my attention. I keep looking and thinking, 'Wonder what's coming next'. Then I watched it a second time and was watching your movement of the camera to get the shots. I'm sure you had a lot of fun. The above Waldo post made me laugh. Keep on shooting!

 

[leaftors]

Ahah thanks for the feedback guys.

 

[richke]

Experimental can;t really be critiqued can it? I liked the one shot where the girl appeared to levitate...but the rest it to random and artsy for me. Sorry.