Melody for Allyriane - A Cowboy Scene Film

DUDE!!! Major kudos for making it to Round 2!

And even more importantly, way to represent Texas!!! :grin:

Daniel
 
hey Jason, good work here. i thought you could have done a little more with it, but then again, you're in round 2! so what do i know?

seriously though, sometimes less is more, and you really pulled off a simple story effectively.

i'm a big fan of your work; good luck in the next round.
 
Wow, simple and nearly perfect. It's easy to see why you made it to round 2. And, I guess I didn't see TwilightFest, but though I enjoyed you TimeFest, this is like miles above it.

Though so I detect an homage to another DVXUser in here?

Anyway, the only ding I can really find in this, was that her voice was markedly more echo-y than his. Not badly recorded, but whatever room it was sounded eche-y. Not a huge deal, but just enough to notice between his talking and hers. It made her voice sound less professionally recorded than his, if that makes sense.

But really nice work guys. Tx DVXUsers can bring it.
 
Wow, simple and nearly perfect.

Thanks Mark!

It's easy to see why you made it to round 2. And, I guess I didn't see TwilightFest, but though I enjoyed you TimeFest, this is like miles above it.

I didn't have a TwilightFest entry, so you didn't miss anything from me.

Though so I detect an homage to another DVXUser in here?

Not intentional... Do you mean Jason Ramsey's film?

Anyway, the only ding I can really find in this, was that her voice was markedly more echo-y than his.

Yeah, his audio was recorded in a different location. It definitely has a different tone.

Thanks for checking this out Mark! I've been meaning to leave you some thought on Evie, but I want to watch it again to refresh my memory.
 
I am proud to be apart of a top 10 movie. Therefore I show my allegiance to Jason Johnson-Spinos!!

Thanks for being in my (our) little experiment piece (for those of you who have been under a rock...the actor in Sudden Realization was Jason. Anyhoos, I'm rooting for ya man!



Rogan
 
Congrats, Jason! For a woman with parents struggling with aging, this film definitely touched my heart!
Also, Zack has adapted your shoe style (different colored Vans on each foot)! He loves it and the comments it brings from his friends ("Did you dress in the dark this morning, dude?"). You're already influencing the younger generation! ;)

Again, congrats and job well-done!

Candy (Zack's mom)
 
This was a beautiful piece, man. Congrats.. seriously. I think this one kind of connected with me the most.. I don't know why, but I just really found myself feeling sad by the end. I'm not old...and I can't play the guitar... I guess I was just REALLY hoping he could get through the song. It made me sad. Haha. But yeah.... very well done. I'm sure you'll place in the top 3.
 
Congrats, Jason! For a woman with parents struggling with aging, this film definitely touched my heart!
Also, Zack has adapted your shoe style (different colored Vans on each foot)! He loves it and the comments it brings from his friends ("Did you dress in the dark this morning, dude?"). You're already influencing the younger generation! ;)

Again, congrats and job well-done!

Candy (Zack's mom)

Thanks Candy! I'm glad you checked the film out. That's so funny about Zack's shoes. I'm glad that I'm apparently a footwear trendsetter.

This was a beautiful piece, man. Congrats.. seriously. I think this one kind of connected with me the most.. I don't know why, but I just really found myself feeling sad by the end. I'm not old...and I can't play the guitar... I guess I was just REALLY hoping he could get through the song. It made me sad. Haha. But yeah.... very well done. I'm sure you'll place in the top 3.

Wow, thank you Mike! I really appreciate that! I'm so glad this connected with you.
 
hey, just watched this again and realized i hadn't commented yet.

i love the blue on the walls. I also like the simplicity in the way you shot her scene. The main actor has quite a look. I like how contained everything is. At times the main room looked a little like a set, but it's solid as hell. Congrats on making it to the end. Really want to see more.
 
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