Complicada Salsa - A New Short Shot on the A1

[rlkproductions]

Hey All,

This is a new short that I shot with a few friends from school. I would love to get some feedback on it before I send it off to some things this weekend. Any suggestions you have are greatly appreciated!

http://vimeo.com/3358751

Thanks,
Ryan

:dankk2:

 

[miamivideo]

Ok Ryan here goes my critiques. The film feels like a long salsa commercial. the girl and the other actors need to improve their acting or get some acting classes, at 1:50 when the girl turns her head she looks straight to the camera. Also you need to improve your framing and white balance, the film had too much orange tone. Congratulation for making this short. In my first short film "killer time" I did not know many technical aspects and I learned them by the critiques from the people of this forum. I hope you become a better filmmaker, keep doing short films and try to improve whatever you did wrong in the previous one.

 

[rlkproductions]

Thanks for the comments. Being in high school, I shot this on very short notice, and didn't have time to secure the actors I really wanted. I would like to encourage you to check out my other films at:
www.vimeo.com/rlkproductions

Thanks for the comments!