"An Enchanting Twist Of Peccadilloes" - A ZazaCast Film

Gohanto said:
I think Jack just said a lot of what I was thinking but definitely explained it a lot better than I could. Interesting characters, I liked her line at the end about the dress upstairs. The "twins forever" didn't really work for me though, kinda cheesy but a good attempt to avoid the cliche a lot of short films have of leaving the audience hanging after killing the main character with a twist at the very end.
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Thanks for the comments...and sorry about the 'cheese', It's the best I could do in a pinch. Live & learn is what I always say and this is a big learning experience for me...thanks again.:beer:
 
You have come a long way from the last fest. You still have a way to go but if you continue progressing as you have this fest, it shouldn't be too long before you begin competing with the elite films in the fest.

Both of your films had what I would consider coherent stories, which I can't say about your TimeFest entry. You next step needs to address the level of acting you are receiving. It's passable now, but to take the next step, you need to ratchet it up. Next, work and then rework the dialogue. I found several instances in both films where I was pulled out of the story because of the dialogue. In places it came off as written prose rather than spoken dialogue.

All in all, you are one of the most improved in this fest. Good going...:thumbsup:
 
Blaine said:
You have come a long way from the last fest. You still have a way to go but if you continue progressing as you have this fest, it shouldn't be too long before you begin competing with the elite films in the fest.

Both of your films had what I would consider coherent stories, which I can't say about your TimeFest entry. You next step needs to address the level of acting you are receiving. It's passable now, but to take the next step, you need to ratchet it up. Next, work and then rework the dialogue. I found several instances in both films where I was pulled out of the story because of the dialogue. In places it came off as written prose rather than spoken dialogue.

All in all, you are one of the most improved in this fest. Good going...:thumbsup:
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Thank you Blaine... I really value your opinions and appreciate you taking the time to review the films! :beer:
 
If anyone is sitting around...stuffed with turkey and all the fixin's...and is bored with the football games...please take a moment to watch and comment on this film.

I would consider it a personal favor.

Happy Thanksgiving!
 
Late to the game, but just saw the film, and it is an intriguing blend of mystery and drama. The death was a bit abrupt, but 6 minutes won't wait. Overall very satisfying. Thanks.
 
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