Movie master's dark fortune "it's to die for" the gate's are open!!!!!

I don't know if I should try to hang with two scoops of terror but I'll be there anyway Movie Master. Looking forward to it. :grin:
 
NAILED IT.

I have to say, I am gaining a real appreciation for MM's work. I think we honest-to-God have a B-Movie-Master in training here.

MM, you GOTTA do some sound work in post. Everything will look 100 times better with good sound.

Now, there's a plot hole in there. But I'll let the rest of you find it for yourself. But it's a fun flick.

And his movies are always some of the first I watch...
 
You're f*cking out there man! Haha... I really dug your films! Some pretty evil, twisted sh*t! Congrats and great work!
 
This is the type of film that you have to make with absolutely no reservations, and you, my friend, had no reservations. Just went for it with everything you had. It was fun. I agree with Mark about the plot hole (and I'm pretty sure we're thinking of the same one), but again, plot holes abound in this genre, so not a big detractor.

Gotta go watch the other one . . .
 
Excellent effort. I'm with the other as far as the plot goes...but then again, your evil rules!
Seemed a little dark and some of the edits looked funky to me.

I'd call this one "Evil Funky Spooky Film"! Great job. Now I must watch the other....
 
:D

Too dark at some parts (hardly to see anything), and yes, improving your sound would make this much better (and by 'much greater', I really mean it.)

Story got me a little counfused, but I enyoyed it.

Hope to see more of some spooky thing on the next fest. Keep up!
 
Movie Master!...you went all Gordon Willis on us! I'm seriously digging some of your dark cinematography here.

Overall I liked the movie quite a bit. I think its an improvement over your previous work.

I havnt seen your other fest entry yet but I'm looking forward to it.
 
Thanks timur yu Da man!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU ALL THINK IT DOES REALLY HELP TO MAKE ME A BETTER FILMMAKER!
SO THAT SAID, LET HER RIP!
 
hmmm. the plot hole is rather large. but the ending does explain why the killer seemed to need a cup of coffee. very entertaining film. congrats on getting one, neh two done.
 
and your point is?

So where is your film hummm?

I tried on to make the best with what i had! On my film. Oh wait i mean films!
Maybe nextime you could show me how it is done!

Agreed 100%. :beer:

As someone/s stated here already:
filmmaker=/=excuse maker


Hmm since you love the horror thing, how about experimenting with some blood one next project? You have some nice actors there, I guess there's no problem for them to get a 'little' bloody 'n stuff. :zombie_smiley:
 
Well, it was indeed a dark fortune that was met. My main question is: why was the daughter so frightened in the house with the killer when they were cahoots the whole time? But good job on getting a youngin to act. It’s the best I’ve seen from a youth in the fest so far (best that required any real acting.... anyone can throw a ball in the air). The biggest issue I see for you to work on is lighting. Keep it in mind …next fest!! Keep it up, you evil person you.

p.s.

and your point is?

So where is your film hummm?

I tried on to make the best with what i had! On my film. Oh wait i mean films!
Maybe nextime you could show me how it is done!

Arrogant maybe, but quite HILARIOUS.
 
Thanks timur yu Da man!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU ALL THINK IT DOES REALLY HELP TO MAKE ME A BETTER FILMMAKER!
SO THAT SAID, LET HER RIP!


I like your camera movement. Try experimenting with dynamic camera moves. Shifts of perspective that reveal things. you started doing this, and i must say i like it. Try it more... experiment with how you can tell the story with the camera, by creating more "meaningful" shots as opposed to, coverage. know what i mean? you've come along way MM......

I want MORE.....
 
I enjoyed this. Things I liked: the girl looked really afraid when she was tied up. I've seen other shorts this fest where victims don't behave afraid. She did. I really liked the moment when she runs out, and your camera is in the car, it really works. The way she spills out of the house, and the mom runs up to her, that was a great moment, made me think of what I'd do if I was a parent and came home to my child running out like that.

Things I didn't like: why was the girl so afraid of the killer when they were working together? That made no sense and ruined the film for me. You should white balance, all the shots are very red, although this might be something you wanted. The driving shots are way too dark, we can't see the drivers, an eye light would have been helpful. Also, why oh why do helpless women walk in houses when there's a danger element in there? Such a cliche, I hate when that happens.

But nonetheless I enjoyed this. It created tension, which is hard to do. Congrats! :thumbsup:
 
Cool flick, MovieMaster!

It's got some genuinely creepy moments. I love the killer's methodical pacing. Kind of a Michael Myers style lunatic. Love it!

There are a few technical issues that maybe need work, ie. lighting, cutting, sound, but they've been covered and are really issues that are easy to improve upon. Every film is a learning process, and you seem to be getting better with each film. Keep it up!

Really cool, gritty vibe. Scary villian. Nice twist. Thumbs up.:thumbup:
 
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