1 min short film

the rule for this was only 1min limit,i couldnt pass the time

please criticize this for me so i can learn
 
For some reason the video keeps stopping at 31 seconds. All I get is "These are my best friends"....then black.
 
post in the "user films" section... you'll get a lot more responses.

As for me, i thought the shots were well done... Althought I believe you could have done more with 1 minute, it was fine for what you were trying to accomplish and I was interested.

I can't really tell you what to work on without seeing more or a longer piece tell ya the truth... maybe you could have tightened the pulling out of the driveway scene a little... and if this were a longer piece, you can't keep using the pan down as an entry point to the scene. It is effective one or two times for the opening shots but it can't be used througout the entire film.

but keep doing what you're doing. You did a good job. Can't think of anything else to add..

And put it in the user films section to get more responses.
 
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