THE TIME TYRO -- a Jeffery, Hanna, Stebbins extravaganza

Thanks Michael!

I got it down to 6:25 tonight. I have to take a break before I gouge my eyes out though.

I don't know what else to cut!
 
Ahhh!!! I'm submitting. With no effects, mind you. But submitting nonetheless.

I really hope this render finishes on time!
 
Thanks man!

Since I couldn't fit in credits, here they are:

Mikal Hanna as The Time Tyro
Alex Jeffery as Jonathan
Rachel Adams as Jeanette
Eric Smith as Father Time


Directed by: Alex Jeffery and Ryan Jones
Produced by: Ryan Jones and Alex Jeffery
Story by: Alex Jeffery
Screenplay by: Alex Jeffery and Mikal Hanna
Director of Photography: Kyle "the man" Stebbins
Camera operators: Kyle Stebbins, Ryan Jones, and Alex Jeffery
Edited by: Alex Jeffery
Original Music: Wayne Everett
Beginning Music: Freeplaymusic.com
Props: Ryan Jones and Alex Jeffery
Set decorators: Rachel Adams, Jessica Merideth, Jill Schrack
Location: Rachel Adams, Jessica Merideth, Jill Schrack
Future VFX by: Nate Caauwe

Thanks so much to everyone who helped!
 
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Really thought you had a solid edit, Alex man.

There were numerous issues with sound and, of course, the missing effects work. All in all, though, I feel that you did a good job achieving a film to be proud of.

Mikal is a natural on camera and has a great sense of humor. He's a funny guy, and will definitely be a great actor to have on hand for future endeavors.

How are things in Arkansas, bud?
 
Thanks mucho Kyle.

Yes, I am definitely gonna work on the sound issues and Nate has the effects shots. I can't wait to work on more stuff dude.

Arkansas is fun, how is L town? I'm so ready to go to North Carolina for combat! And so, so, so ready for Canada. Which we need to meet about by the way!
 
Kyle Stebbins said:
Really thought you had a solid edit, Alex man.

There were numerous issues with sound and, of course, the missing effects work. All in all, though, I feel that you did a good job achieving a film to be proud of.

Mikal is a natural on camera and has a great sense of humor. He's a funny guy, and will definitely be a great actor to have on hand for future endeavors.

How are things in Arkansas, bud?
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and where are all the cross fades? couldn't resist stebbs.

Funny film, nice job.
 
Cute film. I thought the story was fun. The premise definitely grew on me.

I liked when the clocks appeared. Nicely done effect.

Old man time’s shadow distracted a bit at one point, not a big issue. Also, it was a little echoey at times.
Thanks for showing!
 
kurtmo said:
Cute film. I thought the story was fun. The premise definitely grew on me.

I liked when the clocks appeared. Nicely done effect.

Old man time’s shadow distracted a bit at one point, not a big issue. Also, it was a little echoey at times.
Thanks for showing!
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Hey, thanks for the review kurtmo!

The feedback is the best part of entering, because it always helps me grow as a filmmaker. So thank you for the critique! I am definitely going to work on the sound.
 
I thought the story was cool but father time needed to be toned down a bit and not so cheesy. The cast did a great job on acting and the story was pretty solid. Good job.
 
Hey thanks man! I agree he was a bit over-the-top. The make-up should have been better too.

Thanks for all the reviews so far. Keep em coming!
 
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