Killer Time a film by Alain

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miamivideo

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Hi my name is Alain Mayo,
This is my first entry and the first short I'm directing myself. The script is almost finished and in the progress of being revised.



06/21/08- Added New Movie Poster

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Synopsis:

Ricky a Mob boss is the king of the underground gambling in Miami, one day he is notified that in 24hrs an old friend is testifying against him, then he contracts a Hitman to take care of the situation but everything goes wrong when Ricky feels the need of get rid of the hitman.

Killer Time



Crew:

Writer- Alain Mayo/ Lisandra La Fuente
Director/DP- Alain Mayo

Cast:

Mob Boss (Ricky): Jose Roig
Ricky's Assintant: Frantz J
Business man: Mario Milian
Hitman: Jaime Luis Gonzales
 
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hey man, welcome to the fest! - curious... it seems that the word "time" on your poster is from the actual magazine!? am i right??

also, i've love to see some wicked CC on these grabs.
 
I replaced the old frame grabs with new ones due to the fact that I re-do the hole thing and used different people. I will post more grabs soon...
 
Good short.

I liked the story line. It was shot well.

It felt a little slow to get going though. The last half was quite entertaining but the beginning with all of the phone calls took too long for a 6 minute film.

To add a banner: Click "User CP" on the top left of the page under the DVXuser logo. Then click "edit signature". You have to then paste the picture that you've uploaded.
 
Rolling and Reviewing...

I enjoyed how you put dialog over each other. When the assassin completes the sentence. Seeing as how your user name is Miamivideo I assume this take place in Miami? It certainly has that feeling to it. Which is great. The soundtrack was nice as well. Went with it.

That is a terrible spot to put a gun too, aiming at the crotch? Haha, whatever gets the job done I guess. Though a lot of the film happened over the phone. That is my little drawback. WOuld love to have seen more face to face action rather than phone to phone.

Nice brace on impact. And the shot looked a little awkward.

Why does everyone like putting their guns in their pants?

You had a kind of distracting jump cut around 5:40. Could have been solved by doing a two shot and moving the camera 30 degrees.

Nice film though.
 
Thanks everybody, This is my first short and I'm looking forward the next fest. I hope my next short film will be better in the sence that I will have more time to plan and shoot the scenes. I shoot the movie in a period of 11 hours and I had to do everything by myself, I wrote the script, filmed, directed and edited the movie. Again thanks for your reviews and critiques.
 
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