anti aids spot, need ur help...

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anthom

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hey,
im workin on an anti aids spot right now, the concept is an ego perspective,
like prodigys "smack my ***** up"...

http://www.vimeo.com/978884

here are the test shots of it, it has no clear story yet, i just want to know
how the footage is lookin (the visual impression), what u think about it and what i could improve on the real shoot.
no CC yet...

the protagonist is real drunk and f*** up..., maybe u will also have some ideas what he could do in the club and what else i could show to make it clear... the real one will include pukin scenes and other stuff...


julian
 
I think you've got the "smack my ***** up" type of editing, camera, and style down.
Not bad at all. Post the video when you are done... looking good.

I do want to comment that in the VERY beginning there was some kind of movement that didn't look like a black flash frame or 'blinking'... it looked like a live video feed hiccup and that broke the first person reality. I suddenly felt like I was looking out the eyes of a drunk terminator.

That make sense? The black flashes that pass time can be blackouts while the quick flashes can be blinking, but when the footage jams up and looks like a film/video error then a mechanical element is added to the first person perspective.
 
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