bay area hiphop video shot on A1

my opinion:

cinematography: 10/10
audio sync = 8.5/10
editing = 3/10
graphics = 5/10
energy of performers = 9/10

to sum up: all the non-greenscreen scenes look beautiful... but then the whole thing amounts to craziness due to very poor editing. also, i happen to really like that song
 
thanks for the criticism. I appreciate it.

I will have to agree with you entirely about the editing, thats what the client wanted so thats what they got.

Personally im not a huge fan of the video at all. lol

So i take it you listen to hiphop/rap if your liking the song :)
 
I would agree with Nitro's rating, but I would add an extra 3 points for editing.

In my humble opinion, I think if you cut 75% of the clips of the girl (usually in a green tint) you'd make it better.
The shots of her are just distracting.
Or perhaps (for next time) more shots of her close up and actually doing some moves, rather than just swinging back and forth.

Over all, I'd give it a "one point below pro".
Which is a hell of a lot higher than where I am. ;-)

Keep them coming.
Looking forward to seeing your next one.
-Brad
 
Studio Era said:
I would agree with Nitro's rating, but I would add an extra 3 points for editing.

In my humble opinion, I think if you cut 75% of the clips of the girl (usually in a green tint) you'd make it better.
The shots of her are just distracting.
Or perhaps (for next time) more shots of her close up and actually doing some moves, rather than just swinging back and forth.

Over all, I'd give it a "one point below pro".
Which is a hell of a lot higher than where I am. ;-)

Keep them coming.
Looking forward to seeing your next one.
-Brad
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Hey brad, thanks a lot for your opinion. Yeah that girl was all over the place, she really really wanted to make the final cut bad. lol
 
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