THE MOIRÈ EFFECT - a new short film by Ted Arabian

ted - isn't it great to have the supportive spouse? i couldn't do it without mine...

love the title, great choice, can't wait to hear more!
 
Thanks Tomas and Cliff... Yes, a supportive wife is something that I am very thankful for. Makes all the difference in the world!

And thanks Cliff for the additional comments. I hope to provide something on a whole new level for me.
 
Sweet title. Had to Google it to see what it even was, but I'm very curious how you incorporate that into a film.

Best of luck with it.
 
WHEW!!!!!

IT IS WRITTEN!!!!

Info will be posted about the story AFTER a "preview audience" has been selected to read the script!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! :happy:


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Thanks Gohanto!

No Jim... no meds needed to watch! :)
 
Just have to say that I have received some really great feedback thus far. I am very excited to make the suggested changes. I just love hearing the different views.

It is so funny, you get so involved in writing that you can over-look some simple things (and not so simple things!)

I have discovered that writing a Sci-Fi is pretty brutal! There is so much that I feel needs to be explained... you know, being such a fiction and all.

Really want to thank those members who are previewing this script and offering such great feedback.

I say it all the time but I'll say it again..... I LOVE THIS PLACE!!!!

-Ted
 
Science fiction is probably the trickiest stuff to write... I applaud you, Ted, for doing a very good job on your first draft. :)
 
Thanks Tom. You ain't kidding... very tricky! I really do have a ton on material that backs up this story. Some really great stuff.

I had to create all of it just so I could get to the point of writing what I sent you.

Thanks again for the valuable feedback! (and for the smiley!) :beer:

-Ted
 
Also added to Post #2 with other entries...

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Ted, I definitely like the story idea! It gives you room to explore some cool ideas on the whole issue... I can't say what issue as I don't want to give anything away, of course, but the president is a good way to start things off... :)
 
Thanks Tom. Yeah, I wanted to start off with a bang!

HOWEVER, I have been enlightened to some really interesting feedback and am currently doing a complete re-write (just to see if anything sticks).

I do like the approach of the first draft but there is some great ideas in the re-write.

Looking forward to seeing what happens with it.

btw, cast of characters has not changed! :)
 
Just to update (for anyone who may be monitoring) the second revision is coming along nicely. It is awesome to see how the suggestion are tightening this thing up!

I would be able to button this up for a second viewing from if it wasn't for that damn President! (not Bush, but he's no help either! :grin: )
 
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