DEAD BEAUTIFUL: from Jack & Erik (Texture)

Man... I've been biting my tongue on this one b/c I peeked at it the other day...

I really just can't say anything that I could possibly suggest for you to do to improve on this.

From the very first credits and the music is booming, and it's just full of energy right from the start, all the way to the end.

AMAZING!

Later,
Jason
 
I'm not trying to be overly critical and rude but...

This is the worst film ever. It is the dumbest, the most retarded, absolutely atrocious and completely horrible film I've ever seen in my life. What the hell were you thinking dumbass?

I'm trying to be constructive give you props that you actually got off of your Dunder and Miffilin and actually went out and made a film – we all know what an achievement that is and it warrants respect, lots of it.

But still, I can acurately say that this is the worst, dumbest film I've ever seen.

It sucked. Why? I don't know. Anyone?

I don't know how you can fix it. I can't say where you went wrong, or what exactly is wrong or why.

It just didn't work.

Anyway, so what's up with the feature?


Cheers. :beer::Drogar-BigGrin(DBG)
 
"better than Cats, better than E.T."

Jack, I see yet another evolution in your skill set. When you can find eye candy that can also act, well my friend, you have won half the battle. Congrats and I am really glad this one was a non-compete.
 
This film was sexy, daring, and triumphant. Jack, this is your best work yet. I laughed, I cried, and I was terribly frightened. I learned a lot about a weird German kid named Raul.

Much like the chicken bone; I need to let this all digest.
 
Once again, there is nothing I can say against the VFX, acting, directing or cinematography or music. They are down pat; well conceived, well executed.

But the writing (the most important aspect of "true" film) is just not there. Characters are act on a whim with no real reason or thought put into them; they exist ONLY to drive the story (which in itself was lacking) onward. The dialog was also problematic. The attempt at social commentary on the mistreatment of Germans was poorly placed, came off as trite, lacking the exigencies necessary to facilitate itself in such a serious work of erudite intellectual high-brow modern art cinema.

Once again, Jack, you have prodigious skills but [FONT=&quot]debilitated writing abilities.
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StefanHaynes said:
Once again, there is nothing I can say against the VFX, acting, directing or cinematography or music. They are down pat; well conceived, well executed.

But the writing (the most important aspect of "true" film) is just not there. Characters are act on a whim with no real reason or thought put into them; they exist ONLY to drive the story (which in itself was lacking) onward. The dialog was also problematic. The attempt at social commentary on the mistreatment of Germans was poorly placed, came off as trite, lacking the exigencies necessary to facilitate itself in such a serious work of erudite intellectual high-brow modern art cinema.

Once again, Jack, you have prodigious skills but [FONT=&quot]debilitated writing abilities.
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I know I know Stefan. Even in this my best work, my writing is found lacking.

Perhaps you could recommend the thesaurus you use when writing your posts and that might be of some help to me.
 
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