1st edit of North Beach Poet Project

[satkinson]

Here is my 1st edit for a Poet series that I'm toying with, still learning about
shooting, lighting, editing, story telling, audio, etc......still lots of things to learn. Any comments would be greatly accepted, Thanks.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_GYp0i3QF0

 

[PaPa]

cute man.


nicely done.

only comment would be to pay more attention to your framing in your future endeavors.

This is a personal opinion but some of your framing had too much "over the head" area.

 

[Jazz Dog]

Looks like a fun project. I used to live around the corner from Trieste and I miss that scene over there. I agree with the framing issues but I am all about no overhead space. Especially the photographer but you could zoom it in in post if you want. The main thing is though it is all about the story this could be an interesting one.
Nice job.....
Greg

 

[Alan H. Chang]

Wonderful!

Finally I can see the first edit. I will upload audio as soon as I can get the account info. Oh Philip Hacket, memories I would say. Used to teach me Haiku, Poems, paintings, art when I was 6 years old.