Get Off!!!

i normally hate things like this, but there was something inherently charming about that. Plus that chick is sexy as hell ;)

If you actually want constructive criticism, the only thing i'd say is a little of that goes a LONG way. for someone else watching it, I'd say 1:30 serves you better than 3. Pick your best stuff and leave them wanting more.

good times :)
 
Are you kidding me, man? I had 30 minutes worth of footage I crammed into that 3 minutes. In addition to cutting the 5 minute song down seamlessly. But thanx for your input. I DO have an issue, you can watch the WMV version to see it better: why's my ENTIRE video off to the left by like..3? You see it? ALL my videos do that and I don't know how to fix it.
 
I only watched 30 secs- that girl is a pleasure and a treasure, try framing the feet in all the time, it sucks not getting to see the whole body. I'll watch the rest later!
 
This is good chit. Really nice cutting rhythm, no mistakes here, but if you want to take it to a whole other level, I'd do something unexpected too... as is, this follows the music perfectly, but you know, it would be so cool if you did something where you suddenly did a sequence which played a bit with the 4/4 visual/audio relationship. I don't know if I'm making myself clear, but what I mean is like f.ex. when you dance and you go with a move longer than expected by the music, it just takes it to a different level, before you go back into the loop. The dancers are fantastic btw., and you have a lot of good ideas - loved the end with the refrigerator bit...

Very nice overall.
 
Matthew Bennett said:
I only watched 30 secs- that girl is a pleasure and a treasure, try framing the feet in all the time, it sucks not getting to see the whole body. I'll watch the rest later!
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I ponder what's so hard about devoting 3 minutes to a video, but hey, do what u do. And I only show feet for maybe a maximum of 10 seconds throught the entire vid put together...so what r u syaing?​
 
OldCorpse said:
This is good chit. Really nice cutting rhythm, no mistakes here, but if you want to take it to a whole other level, I'd do something unexpected too... as is, this follows the music perfectly, but you know, it would be so cool if you did something where you suddenly did a sequence which played a bit with the 4/4 visual/audio relationship. I don't know if I'm making myself clear, but what I mean is like f.ex. when you dance and you go with a move longer than expected by the music, it just takes it to a different level, before you go back into the loop. The dancers are fantastic btw., and you have a lot of good ideas - loved the end with the refrigerator bit...

Very nice overall.
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that, that 4/4 thing threw me WAAAAY off..lol, sorry​
 
WhiteWood said:
I ponder what's so hard about devoting 3 minutes to a video, but hey, do what u do. ​
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this is what i'm saying. You're right, but most people aren't as patient as you :) 3 min of people dancing against a plain background is a lot to ask. Shorter is better. I'd try to cut it down more. You'll always have the 10 min version for youself :)
 
3 minutes is a bit long. Love the part when the guy surprises her on the sofa. A little kid and play kick step goes a long way. What happens to the shufflefoot and the wop, joking lol
 
That girl was fine as H*LL! & a damn good dancer. The guy was funny too.

The editing was pretty solid, but I agree, cut it in 1/2, making it roughly a minute thirty.

Good luck on the contest!
 
I don't really like the color bars flashing in and out, it doesn't fit with the look of the video. The first couple of times I thought Youtube did something to your video.
 
jade8472 said:
I don't really like the color bars flashing in and out, it doesn't fit with the look of the video. The first couple of times I thought Youtube did something to your video.
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I agree w/ this too. The color bars are so vibrant & the video is more "natural" looking, so the contrast doesn't go together.
 
Cheesesailor77 said:
this is what i'm saying. You're right, but most people aren't as patient as you :) 3 min of people dancing against a plain background is a lot to ask. Shorter is better. I'd try to cut it down more. You'll always have the 10 min version for youself :)
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Well, the video requirements were 1-3 mins...really, I'm going to stand my ground here. I think that 3 minutes is PERFECT b4 the 'bordem level' kicks in when you're watching anything. I could watch a guy talk about the growth of flowers for about 4 minutes untill I realize I don't like it and turn...​
 
jade8472 said:
I don't really like the color bars flashing in and out, it doesn't fit with the look of the video. The first couple of times I thought Youtube did something to your video.
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lol...I felt I needed some sort of effect for the hard snaps in the beat...but I agree, it sort of doesn't fit the dull ashyness of the video, could have found something better...but I don't feel that it HURTS it either.​
 
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