GageFX
Carbonite Member
Hey Lucky,
Great stuff. Looks like you did a whole lot with very little. The only one I really dont like is #3 - hot face on guy on the left and it looks like birthday party camcord footage. Other than that, I really like it. The darker stuff is very nice - I like the contrast and the mood created by the lighting.
I really like #2, though. That is some brilliant use of avaialable light. Close your character in on at least two sides forcing the resulting ambient to become a directional key. You have that great key coming from above and slightly right of camera, but then combined with the shadows created by using the trash bin camera left to block light and then thebright sun above/behind the actor creating the great rim/kicker.
Good job. I wish more people had the ability to see great available light as opposed to just blasting a couple work lights at the scene.
I cant wait to see more.
As for the self praise... easy, buddy. I can tell you're excited, and you do have reason to be, it's just others cant always see past that and at the good work.
-GageFX
Oh, one other thing. I'd like to see your CC/WB a little more consistant. I see three different "stories" (only looking at stills so I dont know what's in the vid). #1 Moody knife guy, #2 Fighting house couple, and #3 Stoner boy. I dont know where the bottle fits in or if moody knife guy is still moody knife guy when the chick is there. Anyway, when stoner boy gets his headache, I'd like to see the WB match his toking. Unless that's an obviously different time of day story-wise - toking at noon, headache at sunset. As I mentioned, I dont like #3, needs work, but then #7, if that is in the same sequence as the rest of moddy nife guy, the CC doesnt match. Just a few things I noticed and I'd like your opinion on them. I might just be missing something. Again, good work.
-GFX
Great stuff. Looks like you did a whole lot with very little. The only one I really dont like is #3 - hot face on guy on the left and it looks like birthday party camcord footage. Other than that, I really like it. The darker stuff is very nice - I like the contrast and the mood created by the lighting.
I really like #2, though. That is some brilliant use of avaialable light. Close your character in on at least two sides forcing the resulting ambient to become a directional key. You have that great key coming from above and slightly right of camera, but then combined with the shadows created by using the trash bin camera left to block light and then thebright sun above/behind the actor creating the great rim/kicker.
Good job. I wish more people had the ability to see great available light as opposed to just blasting a couple work lights at the scene.
I cant wait to see more.
As for the self praise... easy, buddy. I can tell you're excited, and you do have reason to be, it's just others cant always see past that and at the good work.
-GageFX
Oh, one other thing. I'd like to see your CC/WB a little more consistant. I see three different "stories" (only looking at stills so I dont know what's in the vid). #1 Moody knife guy, #2 Fighting house couple, and #3 Stoner boy. I dont know where the bottle fits in or if moody knife guy is still moody knife guy when the chick is there. Anyway, when stoner boy gets his headache, I'd like to see the WB match his toking. Unless that's an obviously different time of day story-wise - toking at noon, headache at sunset. As I mentioned, I dont like #3, needs work, but then #7, if that is in the same sequence as the rest of moddy nife guy, the CC doesnt match. Just a few things I noticed and I'd like your opinion on them. I might just be missing something. Again, good work.
-GFX
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